| Title | Parents should educate their children about puberty | Title |
| Structural features | Type of writing: Argument writing / Persuasive Writing
Do I agree or not? I agree that parents should educate their kids about puberty. |
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I think that the parents should be educating their little kids or their teenagers about the starting of puberty and the end of puberty about how the body can hurt and what it does to the body.
If the parents or if the older people don’t tell them about puberty or what the puberty does they won’t understand any things when they are on it so that is one reason why they should talk to them about puberty or tell them about puberty. Every parent that has a daughter should talk to them or educate them about how puberty works and why it works like that. Mothers or aunts should educate them about puberty starting from the age of 8 because that is the age that girls probably start their puberty. I think that the parents should educate their daughters more, even the girls, because the girls get more pain and more emotions than the boys. Every parent with sons should also educate or talk to them about the meaning of puberty and also why there is a different puberty for the boys. The fathers or the ulcles that live near them or that stay with them should tell them about how puberty works and how it changes their body and they should be talking to them about puberty starting from the age of 9 it is because that the boys can start their puberty from the age of 9 to 14 year old. So do you agree? |
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| Conclusion | This is the same reason why the parents should talk to their younger kids from the right age. They should be educated so when they are in puberty they know what to do and also why it happens to them. |